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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:34 PM | Message # 181 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Well you sure do make alot of sense. I suppose your a weak ass bitch boy" I said sarcastically.
(XD)
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:38 PM | Message # 182 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| "S-shutup! "I said,"I-im not a fucking spy!!!! a-and im s-sensitive you heartless b-bitch! I-if you d-dont believe me t-then just go AWAY!" I yelled. My eyes still puffy and red, and i continued to cry, even though i honestly wasnt upset the least bit.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:41 PM | Message # 183 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "You realize I can see right through you? I've had enough lies told to me in my life. I've gotten so used to them, I can see right through them" my voice was emotionless.
"My lifes a living hell. Litterally.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:44 PM | Message # 184 |
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| Son of a... I stopped crying, and slowly got up and stared at her in the face, wiping off the fake tears on my face. "Well maybe hell is better than here." I said simply as i turned invisible. Added (2011-10-14, 8:44 PM)
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(And invisiblity is NOT camouflage, so that means you WONT be seeing a bulge wherever i move -_-)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:44 PM | Message # 185 |
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| I morphed into a raven. "You have no fucking idea" I crowed, flying out of the cave quickly.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:50 PM | Message # 186 |
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| I smirked. I then pushed the button on my collar. "The shapeshifter girl seems to have the favourite morphs of a wolf, and a crow or raven when she flies off, She has figured what i am, i repeat, She has figured out what i am." "Understood, did you put the microchip on her?" I smirked "Yes, when i went out for a jog to first talk to you, as i went past her i did," "Good, we shall be sending in people to go catch her, it should take about 2 days tops." "Understood" i smiled.."Isaac, out" Added (2011-10-14, 8:50 PM)
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(im not telling where i put it in case you'll go like, "OH WHATS THIS!???? O_O_O_O_O") ((You can escape if you want..i'd just rather that you dont and Zero could save you or somethin...XD))
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:52 PM | Message # 187 |
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| (Mah plan ish mah plan :3)
I landed on a branch, returning human. I sighed, shaking my head. 'I should tell Zero.."
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:54 PM | Message # 188 |
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| I sat there, waiting for Zero..
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:55 PM | Message # 189 |
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| (Can u control the pplz who capture me? Its boring to do it myself)
I leaned back, twideling my fingers.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:59 PM | Message # 190 |
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| (Yeah sure, i might have trouble though, oh yeah, these "reinforcement capturers, are Changers.")
All of a sudden, 3 Teenage boys, and 1 girl that a boy was carrying, all came with the same determined look came, the 2 boys came at her, slamming her, While the girl getting cared raised her hands and produced a blue like orb, surronding Brisk, keeping her in place, so she couldn't move.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 9:01 PM | Message # 191 |
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| "Hooly shiit" I muttered. "Damn bitch boy called for back up, did he?"
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 9:06 PM | Message # 192 |
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| The teens then started to fly back, heading back to T.A.P.A Headquarters.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 10:43 PM | Message # 193 |
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| (wow a lot happened while i was gone lol) While prowling through the forest I picked up the scent of yet ANOTHER changer, then I quickly ran off in the direction of the scent.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-15, 0:06 AM | Message # 194 |
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| (how could possibly smell a changer? Humans and changers are the same, in smell too -_-) Added (2011-10-15, 0:06 Am)
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(Tomorrow me and zero wont be on here, like at all, we have volleyball, were heading to a tournament XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-15, 0:09 AM | Message # 195 |
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| (And by the way Super, you must have read the Bartaeus Trilogy cause a demon imprisoned in a blue orb sound like a Mournful orb, only not so deadly.)When I arrive back at the cave things seem empty? "Hm, quiet...Hello?"
Message edited by Zero - Saturday, 2011-10-15, 0:13 AM |
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