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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-16, 11:05 PM | Message # 211 |
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| I came to the cave behind Zero and snarled at the other one in the cave standing protectivly in front of Zero
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-17, 0:33 AM | Message # 212 |
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| (...zombo.....im just gonna ignore ur post...im sorry T_T)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-10-17, 2:09 PM | Message # 213 |
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| (Are you gonna answer or not? -___-)
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-17, 9:43 PM | Message # 214 |
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| John smiled "Cause im the guy who can get information out one way or another. Now, can you or can you not shapeshift?" He said more seriously.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-18, 1:54 PM | Message # 215 |
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| "And why is it so important? You arent gonna use my powers. I already know who you work for, so I know im in deep shit"
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-18, 7:51 PM | Message # 216 |
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| "Hehe, thats when your wrong. It is important..." He said smiling. "Because we are planning to control these powers, cause y'see, out of the Changers we tested, there seems to be on slightly altered Gene, just one. And its so much smaller than the others. And if its taken away...well. Your regular. And we could inject whatever power a person had into another person, and they would gain their abilities, We haven't managed to yet, since we are still figuring out ways to get the tiny gene...Now, is what Isaac claims correct?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-18, 7:53 PM | Message # 217 |
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| I scowled at the man. I ignored his question. "Youre sick... You deserve to go to hell"
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-18, 8:42 PM | Message # 218 |
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| "Im just gonna assume that Isaac is correct" He said smiling. "Be back soon, Angela, make sure she won't leave..." The teenage girl grinned. "No need to worry..." He then left, leaving Angela and Brisk by themselves. (Try talking to Angela)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-19, 1:30 PM | Message # 219 |
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| I snarled as he left, then looked at this 'Angela' person. I tried to be nice at first. But that was rather hard (XD)
"So.... Erm... Whats up?" I looked pissed off.
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| Zero | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-19, 5:54 PM | Message # 220 |
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| (I'm ignoring Zombo's post too, for the moment.)"Oh, ok I hope shes back soon." Glancing at you looking suspicious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-19, 8:05 PM | Message # 221 |
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| I noticed the look, there seemed to be a tight awkwardness in the air. "Whats wrong? You seem troubled" I said as i layed on my back. "Just relax dude."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-19, 11:06 PM | Message # 222 |
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| (YAY!!! my post got ignored! after I posted it the next day I wanted to delete it)
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-20, 2:03 PM | Message # 223 |
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| (well gee, Super, thanks for replying .__.)
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-20, 10:30 PM | Message # 224 |
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| Angela simply turned her head, then said "Why?" she had long blonde hair with bright blue eyes, the typical hot, dumb, blonde. (XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-21, 1:52 PM | Message # 225 |
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| (Well gee, thanks. Im blonde and I have blue eyes.
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And guess what? Im an A+ student.)
"Stupid blonde... I was being sarcastic, you whore"
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