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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 1:52 PM | Message # 241 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Angela swore, raising her arms, attempting to get her back in the orb.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 3:17 PM | Message # 242 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I smacked her hands down, and put her in a headlock with one arm. With the other arm, I grabbed her wrist and bent them backwards at a harsh angle, good enough to break them.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 8:04 PM | Message # 243 |
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| Angela cried out in pain "Stop! STOP IT! AAHHHH!"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 9:01 PM | Message # 244 |
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| I get to the cave and shapeshift to human before walking in and see a mysterious guy on the ground. I walk over to him and shake his shoulder gently saying "Hey! Wake up!"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
Message edited by Zombo104 - Tuesday, 2011-10-25, 11:47 AM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 11:32 PM | Message # 245 |
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| (Lol, nice try, Zero ran off, remember? But you can said that you shook me to wake me up.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 2:19 PM | Message # 246 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (And please dont try to fit everything in one sentence XD)
"Ha! FUCK NO!" I screamed in her ear. I tightened the headlock, and jerked my arm backwards roughly. Probablly breaking her neck.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 11:58 PM | Message # 247 |
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| "P-please! AHHHHH! I-i'll do ANYTHING! *sob* Just let me go!!! AAHHHHHH" Angela screamed in pain again.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-25, 11:47 AM | Message # 248 |
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| (okay I edited what I said before)
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-25, 2:00 PM | Message # 249 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "You deserve this, fuckin' sinner!" I pulled back harder, digging my nails into her skin.
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| Zero | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-25, 7:36 PM | Message # 250 |
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| (For what it's worth: YOU ARE A DOORNOB.)
I ran in a direction which I asumed to be north-west but, I wasn't quite sure. Later that night I found a quaint oak tree to stay in for the night.
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 0:19 AM | Message # 251 |
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| -Isaac-
I moaned slightly, my vision a bit blurry...seeing a girl. "Where am I?..Who am I?" I asked slightly, my head was throbbing, and I was a bit shaky still.
-Angela-
Angela screamed again, louder "STOP! AHHH! I CAN GET YOU-AAAAAAHHHH- *choke* FREE! *sob* JUST STOP! AAHHH!" Her eyes were wet with tears.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 11:02 AM | Message # 252 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I stopped. "Free? Psh, I can get myself out... But tell me what to do, and where to go. Even give me a map, if you got one"
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| Zombo104 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 11:53 AM | Message # 253 |
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| I noticed that the cave wall had a huge dent in it from where someone must have hit it. "You're in some random cave but who you are you're going to have to tell me yourself. I'm Alisa and what happened?"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 6:12 PM | Message # 254 |
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| -Angela- "Out the door, you'll have to take a left, then a right, also, watch for the security cameras, they're microscopic, then take a right, head 3 doors down, then the exit is on the right" She said gritting her teeth. "NOW LET ME. GO!" (knock her out XD) Added (2011-10-26, 6:12 PM)
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-Isaac-
I stared at the girl named Alisa...I slowly got up, my balance shaky,"I don't know what happened..." I closed my eyes, trying to remember, al i remembered was the grips of...a shoe? Hitting my head. "All i remember is a shoe, hitting my head."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 6:09 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 6:34 PM | Message # 255 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Well thanks. Have a good dream" I smirked. I let go of her, dropped her to the ground, and planted my foot on her back. "Nighty night" I grinned. Immediatly after, I kicked her spine, sending her straight into the cement floor. Knocking her out. Then I followed her instructions.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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