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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 2:03 PM | Message # 271 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| "AAAHHHH" I screamed in pain, as i slowly fell to the ground on my knees, I turned around slightly to see a snake in the corner of my eyes, I started to shake, and have trouble moving, I was becoming paralyzed...I continued to shake, the pain getting more excrutiating as i fell onto my back, and stopped moving, my eyes open, and then slowly closed as I went into utter darkness. (aka knocked out. :3)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 2:34 PM | Message # 272 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| A smirk escaped my lips. I let out a hissing laughter as he fell.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 3:41 PM | Message # 273 |
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| ((waaiittinnn you may as well turn human, and if you were smart...I'd think you'd know what to do.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 5:22 PM | Message # 274 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I turned human, sighing and leaning against the wall. "Sup?" I said to the girl infront of me. I was smirking.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 7:19 PM | Message # 275 |
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| (She doesnt go on much...i really gotta change that -_-)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 8:01 PM | Message # 276 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (x3)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 11:17 PM | Message # 277 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| The scream I'd heard while standing outside of the forest made my blood run cold, my instincts told me to get as far away from that scream as possible but did listen? of course not! My feet moved at an alarming rate taking me deeper into the forest, as I got closer I could hear distant voices echoing in a nearby cave. Cautiously I crept towards the entrance of the cave then hid in the trees knives ready
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-31, 6:47 PM | Message # 278 |
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| I groaned as I layed down on the ground.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 0:16 AM | Message # 279 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| He sounded like he was in so much pain! But I had no idea who had caused it, a wild animal?, another changer? Here goes nothing I thought as I ran into the cave.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 0:23 AM | Message # 280 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Evie ur doing good....)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 9:57 AM | Message # 281 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (What a good newbie.... But that wasnt a good move.... )
I grinned wider, without opening my eyes. "Another changer, I see?"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 7:26 PM | Message # 282 |
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| A growl ripped out from my throat, "Why did you do that?!!" I shouted angrily at the mysterious girl, I looked behind me to see another person behind me with knives. I made a low growl to the person who just entered the cave as a warning and checked to see if Isaac was okay.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 7:56 PM | Message # 283 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| My eyes darted around the small cave, they were all changers. A boy unconscious on the ground, another girl obviously angry and an older boy with a mischievous grin. "Sorry I heard a scream and thought somebody must've got hurt," I mumbled,my eyes drifting over again to the hurt boy on the cold dirt floor.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 7:59 PM | Message # 284 |
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| I continued to lay unconscious, I almost seemed like I was smiling in a way...
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 8:01 PM | Message # 285 |
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| I shook Isaac trying to wake him up for the second time today. "Who are you two?" I asked the strange girls.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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