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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 9:16 PM | Message # 286 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (My guy is still Paralyzed...)
My foot twitched slightly, but the smile did not wear off, nor did I stir when she shook me.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-01, 11:13 PM | Message # 287 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I noticed the boy's foot twitch, paralyzed I thought. Cautiously I stepped over to him and rolled his head over to one side. There were two small swollen holes just underneath his hair. Snake bite, hopefully not deadly but it was too late to take the venom out after it had gone into his blood stream. "He got bit by a snake." I told them. They were both changers maybe one could shape-shifter......great thats just what I need.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-02, 1:09 AM | Message # 288 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (Not in the neck...the leg...XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-02, 2:17 PM | Message # 289 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I smirked. "Im not someone you want to meet"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-02, 5:56 PM | Message # 290 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| Okay! That changer was the shape-shifter. "Dose anybody want some food?", I asked taking my backpack of my shoulder and munching on a bruised apple. I didn't trust them, I was just trying to make the whole situation less awkward plus if they tried a move I could run as fast as the speed of light out of the cave and somewhere safe.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-02, 6:56 PM | Message # 291 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "I catch my own food. You see that kid right there?" I pointed to the boy. "Stay away from him. He's the enemy. He's tricked me once, but he aint fuckin doing that again"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-02, 8:08 PM | Message # 292 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| Thunder rumbled and the rain came down in sheets. I sighed, guess I'll be here for a while water and I didn't do too good. I leaned on the rock wall and said," What did he do anyway?, helpless now he won't be able to move for a few hours." I poked the boy on the ground with my boot. "What are you going to do with him?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-03, 1:48 PM | Message # 293 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "He turned me in to the TAPA. I might... Well, I dont know.."
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 0:18 AM | Message # 294 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Well he sure looks like an idiot now", I said laughing a little bit. If someone had turned me into TAPA, I would get revenge too.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 1:50 PM | Message # 295 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I smirked. "Any ideas on how to get rid of him?"
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 4:36 PM | Message # 296 |
 Famous RP'er
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| "He works for the TAPA??" I asked surprised.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 7:52 PM | Message # 297 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| I questioningly at the boy and shrugged, "I have no idea but sounds like trouble."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 7:54 PM | Message # 298 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Yes he works for TAPA... I think I should let him go, but follow and haunt him" I smirked.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-05, 0:56 AM | Message # 299 |
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| "I know that you two probably don't trust people too often but since it looks like we're all going to stuck in this cave for a while we might as well introduce ourselves to each other...... My name's Alisa..."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-05, 1:00 AM | Message # 300 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
Status: Offline
| I bent down to deadly still boy that the one girl called "Issac" and rolled over his leg. The swelling of the snake bite had gone down but there was still some venom just below the skin. I took one of my knives and made a small cut and put pressure on the bite so that almost all of the venom came out before it could move into his blood stream. The boy twitched. "He should be able to move in about half an hour." I told them turning towards the mouth of the cave. "It was nice meeting some other changers that didn't want to kill me or haven't been brainwashed by TAPA agents, maybe I'll see you around." With my final words I picked up my backpack and sped out of the cave.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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