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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Zero | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 6:36 PM | Message # 256 |
 Great RP'er
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| That coming morning I heard some people walking through the forest...in the middle of nowhere? I go to check it out and find out it's just tourists walking on a path??!! I ask them which way out and left for town.
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 8:09 PM | Message # 257 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Zero...im assuming ur gonna meet demon again XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 11:22 PM | Message # 258 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| name: Virra
Age: 13
Appearance: short, small build, brown eyes with green flecks, black hair (female)
Weapon(s) double knives
Powers: Can control fire, super speed
When were you a Changer?:5 years ago
Bio: N/a
Other:N/a
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 11:26 PM | Message # 259 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Accepted..next time be a bit more descriptive in appearance)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-27, 4:14 PM | Message # 260 |
 Famous RP'er
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| Well that explains why there's a crack in the wall I thought. "What's your name? If you can remember that is." I asked him.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-27, 6:00 PM | Message # 261 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (For thoughts, you use the italics button. Press once to start italics, and when youre done, press it again to finish)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Zero | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-27, 6:49 PM | Message # 262 |
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| I went to a tourist information center and asked where the T. A. P. A. Corporation building is, which they gladly pointed me in the right direction.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-27, 8:16 PM | Message # 263 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I walked straight out of the building, smashing mini cameras and knocking out guards along the way. At the exit, there was this HUGE guy standing there. So I just walked right up, kicked his 'private spot' and put him in a headlock. I pulled my arm back, snapping his neck. Before the blood could stain my arm, I pulled away and shoved the dude away from the door. I opened it, and walked straight through the field. After I hopped the fence, I snickered and shoved my hands in my pockets, walking away.
(Cause Brisk is just that badass)...
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-27, 11:34 PM | Message # 264 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| Me face is hot as I run through the busy streets. The T.A.P.A agents are following me again I already knew about their plans to extract the changers powers and use it somehow but first they had to do tests. Horrible, horrible tests. I shuddered at the thought of the kinds of things they would do, so many of the changers have died already. I ran into an abandoned warehouse and pulled out my knives getting ready for any sudden attacks..
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-27, 11:42 PM | Message # 265 |
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| (Answer what?)
"My..name?" I said through gritted teeth, I closed my eyes..."Eric....Isaiah...hhmmm Isaac? AH! Thats it! Isaac!" I said grinning slightly, "Ow" I said quietly, my head still throbbed.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 3:25 PM | Message # 266 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Nvm...)
I headed back for that cave. After wandering the forest long enough, I saw it dead ahead. I listened, hearing voices inside. I shapeshifted into a harmless, adorable chipmunk, and scurried inside without a sound.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 11:35 PM | Message # 267 |
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| I noticed a squirrel in the corner of the cave...looking curiously at me, all I did was smile at it, an innocent, happy/worn out smile, then gritted my teeth slightly, as the pounding got worse. "Got anything that I can eat?...Cause my head still hurts...I still wish I remembered how I got here...
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 7:24 AM | Message # 268 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| On the inside, I was smirking and laughing... But I didnt show it. Quickly, I changed into a black and red king cobra. I slid behind the boy, unnoticed.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 11:42 AM | Message # 269 |
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| She was quiet, and i just sighed in a surrender like way and said "Come on! Do you have any food or not?!"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 12:58 PM | Message # 270 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I made sure I wasnt deadly poisonous, just enough to knock someone out... I hissed, and striked. I sunk my fangs into his neck, injecting a tiny amount of venom, enough to knock the kid out.
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