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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 4:48 PM | Message # 106 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Did you not hear me?" I growled.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 4:50 PM | Message # 107 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (lol zero, i said that you could come with me.) I gazed up, my eyes surprised for a second, then i wasnt. "ah, the shapeshifter, Why'd you run away from me? Or should i say, fly, away?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 4:51 PM | Message # 108 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "For a second, I had the thought you were a threat. Now, it doesnt seem so. Since you have befriended another Changer, I suppose you arent the enemy"
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 4:55 PM | Message # 109 |
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| I remained silent for a second, then burst out laughing. "A-a enemy! HAHA!!! Y-you got t-to be kidding me!!" I had tears in my eyes as i laughed, another technique i had learned.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 4:55 PM | Message # 110 |
 Great RP'er
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| (OH! Right...I'm blind)I nudged my pocketknife at the other Changer in threatening way.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 4:57 PM | Message # 111 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Im up in a tree, zero.. XD)
I raised my eyebrow. "Nice try, you made yourself more suspicious"
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 4:57 PM | Message # 112 |
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| i stopped laughing then looked at Zero. "Zero! Put the knife away! She is like us, Changers. Dont need to be threatened. Nor to threaten her."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 4:58 PM | Message # 113 |
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| I sighed, jumping down from the tree and landing on my feet. "Im Brisk" I held out my hand.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 5:00 PM | Message # 114 |
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| "Nice to meet you." I said as i shook it firmly. I then looked up at the sky, it was getting dark. "We should get some shelter..and fast."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 5:01 PM | Message # 115 |
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| I shrugged. "I like the dark..." (Hint hint XD)
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 5:02 PM | Message # 116 |
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| (Tree or not oh well)"Fine" I put away the knife, then looks to and from those two, "Well I guess since both of you know my name what is your guyses names?"
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 5:03 PM | Message # 117 |
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| (Lol... I just said hers...)
"Did you not hear me?" I said sarcastically.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 5:04 PM | Message # 118 |
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| (The page loads half then the other later so thats why I'm missing parts)
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 5:05 PM | Message # 119 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| "Lets go, i'm getting tired..." I walked deeper into the forest, enjoying the cool air in front of my face. "I think there is a cave somewhere over here..." There was, i remembered it perfectly well when there were these 3 kids there before, too bad that they were captured.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 5:05 PM | Message # 120 |
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| "Ok lets go."
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