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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:45 PM | Message # 76 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| I furrowed my eyebrows. "You still havent answered my question, since i guess i am apparently not smart enough to find the answer."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:47 PM | Message # 77 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "I practically just answered it"
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:50 PM | Message # 78 |
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| "By saying im stupid?" I said raising an eyebrow. "Why do you refuse to answer..Wait, i think i know why..." I raised my hand towards her, then i made my whole arm disappear. I stood there grinning. "I assume you were the wolf?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:52 PM | Message # 79 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| Immediatly, I morphed into a blck crow, and flew high in the air. I cawed, and a whole swarm of crows flew beside me.
(I gtg. Plz DONT go ahead..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:54 PM | Message # 80 |
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| (I cant really...unless zero comes XD) I made my arm visible..murmuring"A shapeshifter...." Watching the group of crows fly away.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:55 PM | Message # 81 |
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| *I stumbled and triped on a tree root*"OMG is that another Changer?" I thought to myself.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:00 PM | Message # 82 |
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| (Zero, if your ever doing a thought thingy, click on the button that shows an [i] and click on it, then type what your though thingy is and click the [i] again, and then your done. :3) ((Zero, im also listening to the My name is Skrillex song)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:04 PM | Message # 83 |
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| (Haha kool, ok)
Message edited by Zero - Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:05 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:14 PM | Message # 84 |
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| I turned around quickly from the sound of a heavy thud, gazing at a boy on the ground, getting up. "How long were you there for!?" I snapped. My look serious.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:21 PM | Message # 85 |
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| "Leave me!"I said in my demonic voice.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:49 PM | Message # 86 |
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| I stared at him confused, speechless then said. "NO! Im not gonna leave you! How long were you there for!?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:51 PM | Message # 87 |
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| *Looks at you horrified*OMG Your a Changer too?!?!
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:54 PM | Message # 88 |
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| Two in one day..wow I stared at him in silence, then gritted my teeth. "Listen kid!" I said picking him up by the collar."How long were you there for!?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:57 PM | Message # 89 |
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| "Well...I heard you ask how did she get the wolf to go, then you questioned her on her powers, then...ya thats about it."
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 3:59 PM | Message # 90 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| I still kept holding him up in the air. "What did you try to do to me?" (y'know you don have to answer me, you dont always have to follow along with what i say (XD) )
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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