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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Zyphon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 5:19 AM | Message # 61 |
 The Flying Penguin
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| (I change my mind, I quit. >_< I just can't get into the RPing spirit with this RP...)
Flying Penguins
The world would be a better place if they existed.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 9:42 AM | Message # 62 |
 Great RP'er
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| So I finally get to the forest with the aid of some person's vehicle, I parked at the gate and walked in...What was that?...Yes, I did hear it...something in the bushes.(Zombo)
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 9:53 AM | Message # 63 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I growl low in my throat when I see a strange person at the front gates to the forest (Zero) and then go and hide in the bushes preparing to pounce. Then I notice that I wasn't quiet enough and he heard me 'Well, so much for sneaking up' I thought. I pounced.........
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 9:58 AM | Message # 64 |
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| I barely dodged the blow from the strange blur, but I decided use one of my favourite powers...I warped the blurs vision and made a copy of myself running away.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 10:26 AM | Message # 65 |
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| I look at the stranger running away, satisfied I shapeshift back into a human only to turn around and find out that the stranger is right behind me. I yelp in surprise when I see he has a pocket knife pointed at me, then quickly I reach for my pocket knife as well.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 1:46 PM | Message # 66 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (OMFG I just realized someone else has Shapeshifting... Like me... You know...
WARNING FOR NEWBIES:
I can get VERY pissed off, for various reasons.
Ex: People have the same power as me.
Note to Super: You made spark change her power, but not Zombo? -____-
Not fair to Spark, dude)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:12 PM | Message # 67 |
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| (He can be a doorknob at times. =3)I quickly swipe at the...thing...jesguring in a warningly way, not to pull a dick-move.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:21 PM | Message # 68 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Its to late to change her power anyways, so dont bother. I dont wana piss her off too.)
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:25 PM | Message # 69 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Im a spy, and it turns out, dragon is a friend of mine XD )
"My head..." I said getting up, then i looked at the girl..."Where'd the wolf go?....What happened?!" I said, confused.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:30 PM | Message # 70 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Oh, so you dont even look at my post? Way to go, smart ass. XD)
"Oh, that wolf? I scared it off" I lied, rolling my eyes.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:31 PM | Message # 71 |
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| (Damnit, cancle my last post cause Zombo doesn't get out of school for another 2 hours so I'm not waiting.)I put my knife away and run in a random direction in to the forest.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:33 PM | Message # 72 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (2 hours? Damn, where the hell does she live, in London?)
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:39 PM | Message # 73 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| "How?...What did you do?!" I said amazed, yet something seemed suspicious.... i think i may have found my first target. But she seemed quite smart. (No, me, zombo, dragon, and zero are all in the same time zone, its just that are highschool is getting half-days, cause they're busy moving stuff into are new highschool, ITS FUCKING AWESOME!!!)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:41 PM | Message # 74 |
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Great RP'er
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| Hears some people talking not to far off, but I can't help but see what they're talking about.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 2:42 PM | Message # 75 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| (I have nobody here I know in RL.. XD)
"You arent the brightest person around, are you?"
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