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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-07, 3:30 PM | Message # 1111 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Cody brisk and iris are in the cave about to head out. Isaac and Virra are traveling to confront the Government. To change his laws. And Jarren is by himself with this freaky dude in his head in the forest.)
Isaac-
"alright, lets go" I said, and after and hour of jogging, we were at the airport parking lot. I was still visible. I turned and faced here, grabbing her shoulder. Looking her in the eyes. "We have to be careful. I say we go where the luggage goes, where it gets carried into the plane and then we can just run out invisible when I can rest during the flight." I said. "Or do you still suggest the animals?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-07, 3:35 PM | Message # 1112 |
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From the Forest
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| (Thanks)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-07, 5:17 PM | Message # 1113 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I looked back at him. "Sure lets do it your way since you seem to have some sort of fear for animals..."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 7:17 PM | Message # 1114 |
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| Isaac-
I glared. "I do not." I said firmly and me and Virra headed towards the entrance of the airport. "We should head to the washrooms, there, I can turn invisible, so that we can both turn invisible, then we can sneak past the airport attendants that collect baggage and on the bag belt, where we can then be where the planes are. But first, we got to look at the flights to know when one to go to, alright?" I asked quietly as we were close to the doors.
(sorry, this died cause i didnt respond xD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 7:27 PM | Message # 1115 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
"We have to travel a bit up hill to a cave, not to far though," my voice happy and I was beaming.
"Fun," I laughed sarcasticly.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 9:40 PM | Message # 1116 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Yea sure, lets hope this works.." I said then walked in through the doors following the signs that read BATHROOM.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 11:35 PM | Message # 1117 |
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| Issac-
Before the doors opened, and when I made sure no one was around, I turned invisible. Grabbing her hand, (without making her invisible) tugging very lightly towards the girls bathroom. (XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 0:19 AM | Message # 1118 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| When he started pulling me I rolled my eyes but stubbornly followed.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 9:57 AM | Message # 1119 |
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| Isaac-
Once we got into the girl's bathroom, Ironically, it was empty. Perfect timing, I took a deep breath, then focused...and then Virra 'disappear', she was invisible, the same icy feeling overcoming her as it had for me. "20 minutes..." I murmured, breathing heavily. Holding on to her hand hard as speed walked, I knew exactly where to go...And 5 minutes later, we were at the baggage place. I tugged her gently at the open attendant gate, and we both snuck through. And I then went onto the conveyour belt, with her behind me. My breathing was quite heavy, sweat was on my forehead, though no one would see it.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 10:56 PM | Message # 1120 |
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| I started getting bored of hanging around the cave, I liked the company of Brisk and Cody but it was kind of funner when Isaac was around. Gave me something to do kind of. "Listen guys, I'm gunna..... Take off on my own for a bit, I'll find you guys later..." I shape shifted into a black panther and took off running trying to find out where Virra went along with Isaac.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 11:38 PM | Message # 1121 |
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| Cody-
"Wait!!! Are you seriously gonna ditch us?! We need to get Iris out of here!" I said, watching the black panther runaway.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 1:02 AM | Message # 1122 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| When I turned invisible I shivered. This whole thing sounded sketchy, but I still went along with it.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 9:42 AM | Message # 1123 |
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| "Yes, that's who I sensed."
"You're kidding, right? SHE'S the key to endless power? HER?"
"Yes, you little runt. I wish you wouldn't have got that rifle shot off, or I'D be survivor, and you'd be nothing but the voice in my head."
"...But you can take over my body at will, due to your willpower."
"Eh, just means we'll have to work together, for us to survive."
"...And?"
"And if we obtain her power, I plan to go back in time, and remove you from existence."
"You'll need the help of my spirit stealer weaponry, though."
"Good idea."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 2:57 PM | Message # 1124 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| ~Brisk
"Tch. Well we better get her out of here"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 3:24 PM | Message # 1125 |
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| I heard Cody shout but I pretended not to hear. As I ran I tried to remember what my life was like before all this. After running a little ways I turned back and ran back to the cave re shape shifting to human. "Okay nevermind.... I can't even remember my life before I met you guys. I'll stick around until we sort out this problem..."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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