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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 6:14 PM | Message # 1141 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (First time I've seen an error from you Equi...now, how to be surprised without it seeming cheesy.)
Cody-
I stopped walking at the sound at his voice, gritting my teeth slightly as heard his footsteps come up to me, my back was slightly faced to him. "How? How'd I not sense you?...." I asked.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 6:25 PM | Message # 1142 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| (Waiting for Equi...)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 6:32 PM | Message # 1143 |
 RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
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| (Waiting for you super.)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 6:40 PM | Message # 1144 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| "Because I'm not there, of course."
"Also, child, I am Forlorn."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 6:42 PM | Message # 1145 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I rolled my eyes.
~Iris~
Forlorn... That name! It's THAT guy, that they were talking about! "O-oh... Um... Hi?" I squeaked.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 6:51 PM | Message # 1146 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet
Name: Dee Camloy
Age: 17
Appearance: In attachment
Weapons: A silver handgun
Power: Power mimic. (can mimic others powers after making physical contact with them. Can only mimic one at a time.)
When were you a changer?: Born as one.
When you were caught: At birth
Bio: Been with TAPA her whole life but now works for the government.
Other: Has big plans for changers.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 6:53 PM | Message # 1147 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| "You seem....afraid."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 9:21 PM | Message # 1148 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| (I dont know what ur planning evie...but accepted.)
Cody-
I stepped in front of Iris. "Leave her alone. Or else."Added (2012-01-14, 9:21 PM)
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Isaac-
"just....tired. " I murmured, and fell asleep.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 9:38 PM | Message # 1149 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
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| ~Brisk~
I watched with narrowed eyes. No shit she'd be afraid, sherlock!
~Iris~
I trembled. Damnit, what does he want?! What the hell is he planning?
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 9:58 PM | Message # 1150 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| "Why would I do anything to her? I don't even know the lass' name."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-14, 10:20 PM | Message # 1151 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Cody-
"Doesn't mean that you couldn't look into the future to know what she looked like. You even told me, that you knew she would be coming eventually, and you know what she looked like, cause you 'saw' her." I said. "And we certainly both know, what she can do.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 2:23 AM | Message # 1152 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Virra
Oh no.. I hoped he was ok, his powers must've just drained him.
~Dee
I was waiting at an airport as instructed. They didn't explain fully what I was supposed to do but the mission was clear enough. Kill Virra hunt.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 7:38 AM | Message # 1153 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| ~Brisk~
"Nice act, Forlorn" I growled.
~Iris~
He's acting like nothings wrong! What the hell?!
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 12:00 PM | Message # 1154 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
It wasn't long until we reached the cave, and looking at Silver you know she made trouble of it but she smiled anyway.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 1:48 PM | Message # 1155 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| I looked around at them, and thought for a second.
Saw her, her power...
"Ah, I know who this is now. Erm, Iris, correct? Mhm, Yes, nice to meet you."
"And first of all, why would I need her at this point? Yes, she would arrive. Yes, she had the power I needed. But I never said she was at her full potential yet. Until then, she is useless to me, as it is."
"And speaking of that, who the hell is blocking my telepathy?"
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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