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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 2:10 PM | Message # 1156 |
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| Cody-
I stared at him weirdly. "Not me...I thought you were blocking mine, otherwise i would've been able to notice you."Added (2012-01-15, 2:10 PM)
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The plane Isaac and Virra were in was about to take off in 15 minutes.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 2:21 PM | Message # 1157 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I sighed. She's useless to him, for now. Thats a good thing. "As far as I know, it's not me" I shrugged.
~Iris~
I relaxed abit, but stayed alert. "I dont think its me either"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 3:02 PM | Message # 1158 |
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| ~Virra
I sat waiting for the plane to take off but I fell asleep on someones suitcase before it did.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 3:06 PM | Message # 1159 |
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| (IS your other character gonna get on the plane?...or should it get moving?)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 3:10 PM | Message # 1160 |
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| ~Dee
When boarding was called I got onto the plane casually looking like a normal citizen. After about fifteen mins it took off and the I sat in first class waiting for us to build height.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 4:26 PM | Message # 1161 |
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| "I don't know how to block others telepathy so it's not me either......"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 9:22 PM | Message # 1162 |
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| Isaac continued to be asleep....dreaming. What he was dreaming? He didn't know...
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 9:37 PM | Message # 1163 |
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| ~Virra
I had a kind of bad feeling, but I drifted off into a dreamless sleep anyway.
~Dee
The plane was as high in the sky as it was supposed to be and I decided to order a virgin Shirley Temple from a particularly cute waiter.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 9:39 PM | Message # 1164 |
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| (Isn't Dee a girl? And aren't flight attendants always girls?)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 10:16 PM | Message # 1165 |
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| (Wooow....stereotype much..)\
(It was a boy waiter not a girl.)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 10:04 AM | Message # 1166 |
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| "Hmm, odd. It seems to have stopped..."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 11:22 AM | Message # 1167 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "... Well thats not wierd"
~Iris~
I just shrugged.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 6:28 PM | Message # 1168 |
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From the Forest
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| (Idk what to do)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 11:14 PM | Message # 1169 |
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| Cody-
I was taken aback, blinking a couple times as he had said that, I too noticed it, as I immediately felt everyone's presence. I looked at Forlorn in the eyes. "Why are you here Forlorn?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 0:46 AM | Message # 1170 |
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| Dee
It was time to take action. After I had finished my drink I left the bathroom and waited. I had recently duplicated the power of walking through walls from a kid TAPA had been testing on. It was easy for me to get down to the lower levels unnoticed.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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