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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 7:11 PM | Message # 1186 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| (Whoa your the Shana that lives across the street?!?!)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 9:34 PM | Message # 1187 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
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| You all got cool names and I'm stuck with
MaKenzie Ann-Marie I wont say my last name, but I'm changing it soon my initials wills be
MAM verses MAW
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 11:59 PM | Message # 1188 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| (Thats still a cool name!)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 8:51 AM | Message # 1189 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
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| (No its not, my mom wanted to name me Violet, it's better but I don't think it really fits me.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 10:15 AM | Message # 1190 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| (Hell yes I am.)
(And how are the intials MAW not cool? MAW is the initials for the mechas the government has actually open tested before! How the hell is THAT NOT COOL!?)
(I'm gonna change my name to slayzo. I wont change my last name, because, as it turns out, I'm the only one in the ENTIRE FAMILY that is a male with the crouch name, so I'm expected to keep the lineage going for my family. Unless I get a divorce, and my wife and children keep the name.)
(That also means we'll have to keep trying for a boy. Heh. Guess everything has it's upsides.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 10:28 AM | Message # 1191 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| (You sure do have everything figured out!)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 10:44 AM | Message # 1192 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| (They've been pestering me about it since I was 8, I've had 5 years to consider this stuff. Once I get some actual money, I'll run all of this by my girlfriend Laura, and see what she thinks of all this.)
(Something about her christian mottos makes her excited by this kind of stuff, so I'm happy to throw the dog a bone.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 2:43 PM | Message # 1193 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| ~Iris~
I awaited his answer.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Equinox | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 4:20 PM | Message # 1194 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| "Oi Ko, you fool! I've said this three times, I'm bored!"
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 4:25 PM | Message # 1195 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| ~Brisk~
"Who the hell is Ko?" I asked.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Equinox | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 4:37 PM | Message # 1196 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| "And Vil' toro maka?"
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 5:32 PM | Message # 1197 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| "Nevermind" I sighed.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 5:55 PM | Message # 1198 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
Status: Offline
| (No, Epuinox, my initials now are MAW.
When I change my last name my initials will me MAM)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 6:53 PM | Message # 1199 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| Cody-
"Forlorn. Why do you want her power? What in the world do you want to change?!" I said, raising my voice slightly.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 7:27 PM | Message # 1200 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
Status: Offline
| ~Iris~
I glared at Forlorn. I wanted that answer as well.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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