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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 3:29 PM | Message # 1216 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| "You don't see me questioning why none of you try to blend into society, or your reasons for being around here."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 4:37 PM | Message # 1217 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| ".... He has a point... I'm not really one to pry into other's buisness. Besides, we barely know the girl. I'll only be concered if his plans have something to do with mine" I sighed.
~Iris~
I narrowed my eyes. He's hiding something...
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 5:19 PM | Message # 1218 |
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From the Forest
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| (RAGE QUIT!)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 10:31 PM | Message # 1219 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
Once we were around the corner, I let go of her hand, and we became visible, I breathed heavily as I sat against the wall.
Cody-
"Well thats because your decisions could greatly affect OUR decisions. " I countered.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 10:49 PM | Message # 1220 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| "I can only do what she agrees to do. Same with all of you."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 11:40 PM | Message # 1221 |
 Famous RP'er
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| (Super, Demon's 2 char, Equi, and me are in the forest and Evie and Super's other char are in the city.)
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 0:34 AM | Message # 1222 |
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| Cody-
"Well I guess it's best she knows what shes agreeing too. Why don't you let her know what your going to do?" I said, smiling faintly at him.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 0:39 AM | Message # 1223 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Virra
I shivered when the icy feeling left me but right away, I wished I was still invisible.
~Dee
I turned a corner and there those two were. I felt like how a child would on Christmas morning. I walked straight up to them and said, "Excuse me but do you have directions to the nearest hotel?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 0:48 AM | Message # 1224 |
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| Isaac-
I looked up at her, smiling faintly in a greeting, sweat was on my forehead from being exhausted. "Yes, theres a hotel about 50 kilometers from here called The Rambel Hotel, Take a left after the parking lot and once you've passed 3 blocks take a right and it should be on your left." I said smoothly. "Oh yeah, They have wonderful service, try having a Shirly temple there." I said. (Without completely realising thats her favourite drink or whatever.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 10:25 AM | Message # 1225 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| "I'll say it, if you say yours."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 2:59 PM | Message # 1226 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| ~Brisk~
"I have no real intentions, I'm just intrested in yours" I shrugged.
~Iris~
"I won't agree to anything that's.... Bad...."
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 3:44 PM | Message # 1227 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| "That means your intentions are to know my thoughts."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 5:11 PM | Message # 1228 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "I guess you could put it that way"
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-24, 0:42 AM | Message # 1229 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Virra
There was something weird about this girl...
~Dee
"Well I'm new around here...could you show me? If it's not too much trouble that is." I smiled sweetly and touched his shoulder when I said this mimicking his power. But he would never know.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-25, 0:58 AM | Message # 1230 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
"If you could rent the car then sure. It can be my 'little fee' " I said smiling faintly back to her, though the hand on the shoulder was a bit creepy. I didn't know why she did that, but I remained cool.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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