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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 1:43 PM | Message # 1246 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
I slowly opened my eyes...it was blurry to see at first. Very blurry....I looked up. I was in a room. "Grh..." My mouth felt somewhat heavy.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 2:21 PM | Message # 1247 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "Hes awake. The girls still asleep." The guard gruffly said. I entered the room and sat down across from the boy motioning for the guard to go. "Had a nice sleep?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 2:29 PM | Message # 1248 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
I stared at her...I couldn't think clearly...."Fine..." I mumbled, realizing the heavyness in my mouth was wearing off.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 2:46 PM | Message # 1249 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Anything to eat maybe something to drink?" I said casually as if he were a friend visiting my home.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 3:02 PM | Message # 1250 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
"I'm no taking anything from you..." I said, and looked around the room more. Speaking of which...she seemed familiar. She's a T.A.P.A. Agent! I remembered her from when I trained years ago. She was one of the top students....her name though, I did not remember. "You...find me familiar? " I said drowsily. With a faint smile.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 3:36 PM | Message # 1251 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "You went rouge. Lucky for you though I'm not here to kill you. Just Virra, that is unless you want to die." I smirked. "Your name is Issac, and I don't work just for TAPA anymore, I work for the higher ranks of the government." I smiled and crossed my legs.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 5:00 PM | Message # 1252 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
"Why would you....want to kill Virra? There are bigger problems...than just her." I said.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 5:09 PM | Message # 1253 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| "When I get orders I follow them. I don't ask anymore questions." I sighed.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zyphon | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 5:13 PM | Message # 1254 |
 The Flying Penguin
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| (...Fabulous... If I wanted to join then I'd have to read through all the almost 90 pages. You see, this is why we have RP summaries.)
(And yes, I do have nothing better to do than try to guilt people into writing the summaries and PMing them to me, as it takes a ridiculous amount of time for things on youtube to buffer...)
Flying Penguins
The world would be a better place if they existed.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 5:19 PM | Message # 1255 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (I've never tryed doing a summary before...But since i've been in this roleplay the whole time. I'll try to get you up to date, want me to send you a message with a summary, or a brief summary?)? Added (2012-01-27, 5:19 PM)
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Isaac-?"
I smiled at that. "sounds like your definitely 'high in ranks.' Now arent you?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 5:23 PM | Message # 1256 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Dee
"I am. Your lucky I didn't get orders to kill you, you'd be dead already." I said sighing again. "Do you want to see Virra?"
~Virra
I woke in a white room strapped to a chair. "Damn..." I mumbled. Where the hell was Issac?
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 5:41 PM | Message # 1257 |
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| Isaac-
"If I answered would it even be put into matter?" I said, responding back at her.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 6:29 PM | Message # 1258 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Yes, your well being matters to me. I do have orders to follow but you can see her once more if you like." I said sincere to my words.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-28, 4:09 PM | Message # 1259 |
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| Isaac-
I gave her a hard look...."Fine. Show me her."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-28, 4:25 PM | Message # 1260 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Dee
"Bring her in and secure her." I said into my hidden microphone. A few minutes passed and Virra walked in with a bag over her head. "You can seat her right here." I said pointing to a chair. When he was finished securing the bonds he pulled off the bag and left.
~Virra
I heard footsteps and a man came in and pulled a bag over my head then forced me to stand. Walking for a few minutes and entered a room. Then I heard the girls voice. I didn't say anything as I sat down and the bag was pulled off my head again.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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