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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-28, 5:00 PM | Message # 1261 |
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From the Forest
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| (Hey can I trash my old characters and make new ones so I can actually RP?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-28, 5:43 PM | Message # 1262 |
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| Isaac-
"Now, why did you capture me as well, if all you needed was her? You could've just ditched me somewhere." I said to her sharply.Added (2012-01-28, 5:43 PM)
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(yes thats fine)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-28, 5:44 PM | Message # 1263 |
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| (I'll post later)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-28, 6:11 PM | Message # 1264 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Dee
"You cause trouble, I couldn't risk it." I said with no expression.
~Virra
"Wait...whats going on? Do you know her?" I asked Issac. Was this just plan for him to kill me?
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-28, 7:47 PM | Message # 1265 |
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| -Changer Character sheet-
Name: Vala
Age: 19
Appearance: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_zjl_Ga....768.jpg
Weapon(s)?(Don't have to have one): A long sword, much like a sword used for fencing but sharper, it’s the main part of her umbrella. The handle of the sword is the straight part of the handle of the umbrella. Inside the handle is a dagger, the curve of the umbrella's handle being the daggers handle. The top red part folds and unfolds to make a sheath or the top of the umbrella.
Powers(Two please. no more than that.): Manipulation of temperature and weather, (Not creation, manipulation so making this worse or better, stronger, faster, slower, calmer, colder, hotter, extra.)
When were you a Changer?: Since birth-5 years
Bio: She was raised in Alaska Nome, home schooled by her parent she enjoys extreme temperatures to drive her senses to the edge of there limit. Her parent never found out she was a changer because she kept it hidden to herself she's not sure when she got the powers but for sure knows she could easily control them at age five, though if she thinks hard enough there are signs that she did it before. She lived a quiet life, but loved the purist of gaining adrenaline to the point she was almost drunk with it, she took gymnastics fencing and karate, what was hard to do in the small town she lived in. Right know she's traveling the world since the government recently found her, she simply lie to her parents saying it's part of her scholarship to be a Marie biologist because she doesn't want there lives to get involved and somehow it worked up to now.
Other: She's like wind, here one second with massive power, gone the next without a trace. She has both the wrath of a frost bit winter and a grass fire summer, but also the kindness of a cool breeze or a lightly sunny day honestly depends on the last five seconds of her life because she changes as quick as real weather.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-02-03, 8:50 PM | Message # 1266 |
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| Isaac-
"I know her...she was in T.A.P.A training with me. What amazes me is the fact that they want to kill you." I said, stifling a laugh. I seriously thought she wasnt that much of a threat.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2012-02-03, 9:42 PM | Message # 1267 |
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| (Am I accepted or no?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-02-04, 2:15 AM | Message # 1268 |
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| (Whoops i forgot to say accepted xD Accepted.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-02-04, 2:18 AM | Message # 1269 |
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| ~Dee
I was offended by Issac's laugh and I didn't smile. "Listen Issac I'd be careful what you say, all it takes is some draino in the neck." Now I smiled.
~Virra
I swallowed hard.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-02-04, 2:23 AM | Message # 1270 |
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| Isaac-
I stopped smiling then said. "How come you want to kill her, sure you'd have some 'idea' why? What about Cody? Why aren't you people hunting him down? He's a fellow T.A.P.A. agent as well."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-02-04, 2:41 AM | Message # 1271 |
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| "Virra isn't an old TAPA agent, and as I said I'm not after you." I pulled a syringe out of my purse again and pushed on the end so some liquid came out. "You don't have to watch, your next." I paused and looked at him. "I guess I changed my mind."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-02-04, 2:43 AM | Message # 1272 |
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| Isaac-
I glared at her.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2012-02-04, 11:29 AM | Message # 1273 |
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| (Hey where are you?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-02-04, 3:45 PM | Message # 1274 |
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| "Please don't look so glum, I'm just doing my job." I smiled then walked over behind his chair. "This will just sting a bit." I stuck the syringe in his neck, emptying the liquid. Then I turned and sat back in my chair.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2012-02-04, 3:59 PM | Message # 1275 |
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| ~Vala
I walk slowly through the town, there was a light drizzle all on it's own, I was exhausted but you couldn't tell from just looking at me. I had been walking for weeks, if I only have enough money to rent a car, or buy one.... Only problem with that is I might be easier to track so maybe walking was the best solution, although I could use a bike. I stop at a calm street corner and ponder this idea finally decided that when I get a change I'll get a bike.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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