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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-25, 1:04 AM | Message # 1231 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Dee
"Thats perfect. Thank you so much, I must admit I am very bad with maps." I said innocently then waved my hand for a cab.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 0:31 AM | Message # 1232 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
I walked in the cab with her, telling the Taxi driver the name of the hotel. And he began to take us there. "Directions huh? " I said smirking at the girl.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 1:39 AM | Message # 1233 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| (Super, is your power just invisibility?)
I leaned in and waved my hand as if to push my hair out of my face but truly it was a signal. The taxi driver was just another agent. "Yes, it's been a main weakness of mine, especially in my travels." I sighed.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 3:13 AM | Message # 1234 |
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| Isaac-
"But...you said you were horrible with maps, yet you travel a lot?" I asked, raising an eyebrow.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 3:39 AM | Message # 1235 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Yes, I love to travel. I seem to always get lost , so it usually turns out an adventure." I nodded.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 11:05 AM | Message # 1236 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Its just invisibility. Also, is the cab driver actually taking us to the hotel or no?)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 1:15 PM | Message # 1237 |
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| (Nope he isn't but you don't know that.)
~Dee
I noticed Virra was wearing a bracelet, it was the perfect decoy. "Love your bracelet by the way." I said looking and Virra. "Is it real gold?" I touched the bracelet and her hand at the same time mimicking her powers.
~Virra
I pulled away sharply when she touched my hand. "Yes, its real gold." I said a bit timidly.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 7:35 PM | Message # 1238 |
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| Isaac-
I looked around...we werent going to the hotel...its been an hour and we should've been there by now...but I was patient...maybe it wasnt as close as I thought.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 8:31 PM | Message # 1239 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Dee
"So where are you guys heading?" I asked sweetly.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 11:52 PM | Message # 1240 |
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| Isaac-
"Where destiny takes us." I said lightly, as a small joke. (get your plan into action xD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 1:40 AM | Message # 1241 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Dee
Sighing, I nodded. This was getting boring. "I'm sorry to say that this is what destiny has in store for you." I said with a sorry expression. Then with lightning fast movements I pulled out two syringes out of my bag and injected them into both of their necks. "Night, night."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 2:09 AM | Message # 1242 |
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| Isaac-
I grazed her lightly with a punch as she put the syringe into my neck. I stared at her, and before I dozed off from chemicals I smiled faintly...then went unconscious.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 2:47 AM | Message # 1243 |
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| "You punch like a girl." I said even though he couldn't hear me. We were almost at out destination.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 2:52 AM | Message # 1244 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (you could've just time skipped, like, 'Once we arrived at our destination in ___ minutes or whatever xD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-27, 3:27 AM | Message # 1245 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| We got there and two armed guards pulled Virra and the boy out of the cab. Bringing them each to two different rooms. I injected each of them with the serum that makes it so a changer can't access there powers and secured their bonds. They were both just worthless humans now...for a matter of time. "They should wake in a few minutes, tell me when they do." I said to the guard then left Virra's room.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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