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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 8:46 PM | Message # 1201 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| Virra
I woke up when the plane landed then shook Issac awake.
Dee
I had already left the plane easily. I knew where Virra would hide. We had her profiled and the boy she was with too. So I waited.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 9:48 PM | Message # 1202 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
"MMph...what Virra?" I mumbled.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 2:15 AM | Message # 1203 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "We have to get off. They are going to start pulling out the luggage." I said dragging him to his feet.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 10:30 AM | Message # 1204 |
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| Isaac-
"Oh, right" I said, groggily as I stood up.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 12:06 PM | Message # 1205 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| "The question is, why do you want to be involved?"
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 2:05 PM | Message # 1206 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| "We don't, we're curious of your intentions"
~Iris~
I nodded.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 7:13 PM | Message # 1207 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Listen its your call Issac, I'm not the one who can turn invisible." I said slightly annoyed. The workers were starting to pull off luggage.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 11:02 PM | Message # 1208 |
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| Isaac-
"Yeah...I know" I gripped her hand firmly and the col icyness came upon us. I tugged on her hand lightly as I brought her down the ramp and covered her mouth as I jumped off the side, it was a small less than a meter jump, but it would probably startle her.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 1:44 AM | Message # 1209 |
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| ~Dee
I sat waiting in the airport.
~Virra
I didn't like being pulled around like a rag doll and when we got into the air port I whispered, "So whats the plan now? Where do we have to go?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 2:49 AM | Message # 1210 |
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| Isaac-
"To...where the government is." I said quietly, I was breathing slightly heavy. We jogged through the doors of a private room, which had an upstairs which we went up and went out the door, since it wasn't locked from the inside. And we were in the middle of the airport, and I headed towards the front doors.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 2:58 AM | Message # 1211 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| ~Dee
I felt a gush of wind pass me and I could sense something...someone. Virra. I stood up and followed
~Virra
I turned and noticed some girl stand up just after we walked by. But she couldn't see us...could she?
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 11:31 AM | Message # 1212 |
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From the Forest
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| (What is everyone doing?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 12:19 PM | Message # 1213 |
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| Isaac-
I felt Virra slow down for a second and I tugged for her to move on. And we headed through the slide doors with another pair of people and took a left. "Run...around the corner of the building...so we won't get seen turning visible. Ready?"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 12:33 PM | Message # 1214 |
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From the Forest
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| (Super?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 3:08 PM | Message # 1215 |
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| ~Virra
I shrugged off the bad feeling and said, "Okay."
~Dee
I stayed where I was, out in the parking lot. They wouldn't stay visible forever.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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