Story: 9.5/10

Grammar: 10/10

Originality: N/a

Effort: 10/10

Character Sheet: 10/10

Review: First off, I'd like to point out that becasue this is based off a book, originality has been excluded. It seems as if this RP was very well written and had a lot of effort put into it. There were no obvious problems with grammar or CS. Overall, it seemed like a very good RP which will probably stay around for a long while.

 

~Zyphon, The Flying Penguin