Story: 9.5/10
Grammar: 10/10
Originality: N/a
Effort: 10/10
Character Sheet: 10/10
Review: First off, I'd like to point out that becasue this is based off a book, originality has been excluded. It seems as if this RP was very well written and had a lot of effort put into it. There were no obvious problems with grammar or CS. Overall, it seemed like a very good RP which will probably stay around for a long while.
Grammar: 10/10
Originality: N/a
Effort: 10/10
Character Sheet: 10/10
Review: First off, I'd like to point out that becasue this is based off a book, originality has been excluded. It seems as if this RP was very well written and had a lot of effort put into it. There were no obvious problems with grammar or CS. Overall, it seemed like a very good RP which will probably stay around for a long while.
~Zyphon, The Flying Penguin