Story: 10/10

Grammar: 10/10

Originality: 6.5/10

Effort: 10/10

Character Sheet: 10/10

Review: The story was very well written, and I have no actual complaints there. There were no obvious problems with grammar, but there were a few lost points on originatlity, as there have been Hybrid RPs in the past with the whole science facility thing. As for effort, 10/10. and character sheet, another 10/10. As far as I'm concerned, this is an above average RP, that should go on for a fairly long while as long as people mantain interest.

 

~Zyphon, The Flying Penguin.