Story: 6/10
Grammar: 8/10
Originality: 4/10
Effort: 8/10
Character Sheet: 10/10
Review: The story of this RP, I felt could've been expanded on a bit more, and didn't really have anything in it to make it stand out more than any other story. There were minimal grammar errors, only a few misspellings. As for originality, a school for special kids with powers, is definatly not the most original thing, infact, I'd call it overused even. As for effort There seemed to be a fair amount of effort involved in making this RP. However, the fact of it not having much originality, will definatley bring it down, anyways, I'd say it's a fairly average RP, with nothing really remarkable about it.
Grammar: 8/10
Originality: 4/10
Effort: 8/10
Character Sheet: 10/10
Review: The story of this RP, I felt could've been expanded on a bit more, and didn't really have anything in it to make it stand out more than any other story. There were minimal grammar errors, only a few misspellings. As for originality, a school for special kids with powers, is definatly not the most original thing, infact, I'd call it overused even. As for effort There seemed to be a fair amount of effort involved in making this RP. However, the fact of it not having much originality, will definatley bring it down, anyways, I'd say it's a fairly average RP, with nothing really remarkable about it.
~Zyphon, The Flying Penguin