Grammar: 10/10
Originality: 9/10
Effort: 10/10
Review: The story was pretty well placed in the horror section, because it scared me. Really, it takes a lot to creep me out. The grammar was perfect, the originality was 9/10, pretty much because of the whole 'Grim Reaper' thing. I think the story was well planned out and thought out, because really, not many people would think up a story like this. Even if they could, it wouldn't be as descriptive and long as this is. I think that a lot of horror fans will LOVE this, and I really would reccomend this to everyone who won't pee their pants. I really think this is awesome.
~ Spark