Story: 8/10

Grammar: 8/10

Originality: 6/10

Effort: 10/10

Character Sheet: 10/10

Review: The story was written fairly well, better than some RPs and probably would be called "above average" than most. There were a few spelling mistakes, but not too many. As for originality, having "angels V.S demons" is not too original, but not overused either. There appears to be a lot of effort put into it, and the character sheet has exceptional detail. Fantastic for a first RP!

 

~Zyphon, The Flying Penguin