Story: 10/10

Grammar: 10/10

Originality: 8/10

Effort: 10/10

Character Sheet: 11?/10

Review: The story was fairly well written, and very interesting. I've not really many complaints there... At all. Grammar, agian, as far as I can see, no problems. Originality is the only thing you really lost points in, only because vampires are, as a whole, overused. Anything to do with vampires or zombies or anything like that really can't get 10/10. It's nearly impossible. Effort, again no complaint. Character sheet was super overly detailed, and so it get's an 11... Even though that's not actually all that possible.

 

~Zyphon, The Flying Penguin