Sorry for the delay. I believe that all of you know the reason, but, if not, please read this thread.

 

Anyways, because there were only two entries, I decided to only choose a first-place winner. And that being said, I chose Zyphon's "Dreams". Here are my reasons:

 

Length

Grammar

Extensive Diologue

It was a very captivating story.

 

Congratulations, Zyphon. Congratulations also to Spark, for actually competing in the contest. Sorry again for the delay.